[or-cvs] r9876: gooder grammar (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-03-19 06:00:34 -0400 (Mon, 19 Mar 2007)
New Revision: 9876

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/volunteer.wml
Log:
gooder grammar


Modified: website/trunk/en/volunteer.wml
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--- website/trunk/en/volunteer.wml	2007-03-19 09:47:38 UTC (rev 9875)
+++ website/trunk/en/volunteer.wml	2007-03-19 10:00:34 UTC (rev 9876)
@@ -265,11 +265,11 @@
 approximations, such as avoiding IP addresses in the same /8 network?</li>
 <li>Other research questions regarding geographic diversity consider
 the tradeoff between choosing an efficient circuit and choosing a random
-circuit. Look at at Stephen Rollyson's <a
+circuit. Look at Stephen Rollyson's <a
 href="http://swiki.cc.gatech.edu:8080/ugResearch/uploads/7/ImprovingTor.pdf">position
 paper</a> on how to discard particularly slow choices without hurting
-anonymity "too" much. This line of reasoning needs more work and more
-thinking, but it seems very promising.</li>
+anonymity "too much". This line of reasoning needs more work and more
+thinking, but it looks very promising.</li>
 <li>Tor doesn't work very well when servers have asymmetric bandwidth
 (e.g. cable or DSL). Because Tor has separate TCP connections between
 each hop, if the incoming bytes are arriving just fine and the outgoing