[or-cvs] r8363: tweaks (website/trunk/en)

[arma at seul.org]

Author: arma
Date: 2006-09-11 17:46:26 -0400 (Mon, 11 Sep 2006)
New Revision: 8363

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
tweaks


Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2006-09-11 21:34:23 UTC (rev 8362)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2006-09-11 21:46:26 UTC (rev 8363)
@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
 <p>
 Last week, a few Tor exit nodes were seized by the German police in a
 massive sting against child pornography.  From our friends on the ground in
-Germany, we hear that dozens and dozens of other computers may have been
-seized too.
+Germany, we hear that dozens and dozens of other computers unrelated
+to Tor may have been seized too.
 </p>
 
 <p>So far as we know, only six of those were Tor servers.  We have heard
@@ -80,10 +80,10 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-<b>This is not a "crackdown" on Tor</b>, as has been widely reported.
+<b>This is not a "crackdown on Tor"</b>, as has been widely reported.
 This seems to be part of a wide sweep on computers associated by IP address
 with a large child porn bust.  There does not seem to be any specific
-targetting of Tor &mdash; Tor is used by journalists, human rights
+targeting of Tor &mdash; Tor is used by journalists, human rights
 activists, dissident bloggers, and a vast array of blameless users.
 </p>