[or-cvs] make it clearer that a tor gui entry does not *need* to use

[arma at seul.org]

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website/gui/en
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/website/gui/en

Modified Files:
	index.wml 
Log Message:
make it clearer that a tor gui entry does not *need* to use
the controller protocol.


Index: index.wml
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/website/gui/en/index.wml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -p -d -r1.8 -r1.9
--- index.wml	23 Apr 2006 20:48:35 -0000	1.8
+++ index.wml	11 May 2006 04:30:01 -0000	1.9
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ for every submission!
 Tor is a decentralized network of computers on the Internet that increases
 privacy in Web browsing, instant messaging, and other applications. We
 estimate there are some 200,000 Tor users currently, routing their traffic
-through about 400 volunteer Tor servers on six continents. However, Tor's
+through about 500 volunteer Tor servers on six continents. However, Tor's
 current user interface approach — running as a service in the background
 — does a poor job of communicating network status and security levels
 to the user.
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ applications are using Tor safely.
 <h2>Goals</h2>
 <p>Submitters for phase two will produce a work of <a
 href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open Source Software</a>
-that will provide a user interface to the Tor system by way of the
+that will provide a user interface to the Tor system, perhaps by way of the
 <a href="/cvs/control/doc/howto.txt">Tor Controller Protocol</a>.</p>
 
 <p>We are looking for a vision of how Tor can work in a user's everyday
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ anonymous browsing experience.</p>
 for and opening text files.</li>
 <li>Let users learn about the current state of their Tor connection
 (for example, how well the current Tor connection is working),
-and find out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>
+and configure or find out whether any of their applications are using it.</li>
 <li>Make alerts and error conditions visible to the user.</li>
 <li>Run on at least one of Windows, Linux, and OS&nbsp;X, on a
 not-unusually-configured consumer-level machine.</li>