[or-cvs] clean up some grammar

Roger Dingledine arma at seul.org
Fri May 6 05:11:08 UTC 2005


Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-osx.html tor-doc-win32.html 
Log Message:
clean up some grammar


Index: tor-doc-osx.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-osx.html,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -d -r1.19 -r1.20
--- tor-doc-osx.html	27 Apr 2005 23:13:15 -0000	1.19
+++ tor-doc-osx.html	6 May 2005 05:11:05 -0000	1.20
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@
 <a name="installing"></a>
 <h2>Step One: Download and Install Tor</h2>
 <p>
-<b>Note that this is the installation instructions for running a client on
+<b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a client on
   Mac OS X. If you want to run a server (please do), read the "Configuring a
   server" section at <a href="tor-doc.html#server">tor-doc.html</a>.</b>
 </p>
 <p>
-This document was updated April 27 2005.
+This document was updated May 6 2005.
 </p>
 <p>
 The latest beta release of Tor for Macintosh OS X is <a

Index: tor-doc-win32.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-win32.html,v
retrieving revision 1.34
retrieving revision 1.35
diff -u -d -r1.34 -r1.35
--- tor-doc-win32.html	27 Apr 2005 23:13:15 -0000	1.34
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	6 May 2005 05:11:06 -0000	1.35
@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@
 <a name="installing"></a>
 <h2>Step One: Download and Install Tor</h2>
 <p>
-<b>Note that this is the installation instructions for running a client on Win32.
+<b>Note that these are the installation instructions for running a client on Win32.
 If you want to run a server (please do), read the "Configuring a server" section at
 <a href="tor-doc.html#server">tor-doc.html</a>.</b>
 </p>
 <p>
-This document was updated April 27 2005.
+This document was updated May 6 2005.
 </p>
 <p>
 The latest beta release of Tor for Windows 32 is



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