[or-cvs] fix sentence, fix html

arma at seul.org arma at seul.org
Mon Aug 22 07:14:14 UTC 2005


Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria:/home/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-win32.html tor-doc-osx.html tor-doc-unix.html 
	tor-doc-server.html 
Log Message:
fix sentence, fix html


Index: tor-doc-win32.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-win32.html,v
retrieving revision 1.78
retrieving revision 1.79
diff -u -d -r1.78 -r1.79
--- tor-doc-win32.html	19 Aug 2005 21:52:21 -0000	1.78
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	22 Aug 2005 07:14:12 -0000	1.79
@@ -268,8 +268,8 @@
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>

Index: tor-doc-osx.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-osx.html,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -d -r1.47 -r1.48
--- tor-doc-osx.html	19 Aug 2005 21:52:21 -0000	1.47
+++ tor-doc-osx.html	22 Aug 2005 07:14:12 -0000	1.48
@@ -217,8 +217,8 @@
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>

Index: tor-doc-unix.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-unix.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- tor-doc-unix.html	19 Aug 2005 21:52:21 -0000	1.5
+++ tor-doc-unix.html	22 Aug 2005 07:14:12 -0000	1.6
@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Read more at our <a href="tor-doc-server.html">Configuring a server</a>
 guide.</p>

Index: tor-doc-server.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-server.html,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -d -r1.5 -r1.6
--- tor-doc-server.html	19 Aug 2005 21:52:21 -0000	1.5
+++ tor-doc-server.html	22 Aug 2005 07:14:12 -0000	1.6
@@ -42,6 +42,7 @@
 <h1>Configuring a <a href="http://tor.eff.org/">Tor</a> server</h1>
 <br />
 
+<p>
 The Tor network relies on volunteers to donate bandwidth. The more
 people who run servers, the faster the Tor network will be. If you have
 at least 20 kilobytes/s each way, please help out Tor by configuring your
@@ -52,8 +53,8 @@
 
 <p>Having servers in many different places on the Internet is what
 makes Tor users secure. You may also get stronger anonymity yourself,
-since remote sites can't know whether connections relayed through your
-computer originated at your computer or not.</p>
+since remote sites can't know whether connections originated at your
+computer or were relayed from others.</p>
 
 <p>Setting up a Tor server is easy and convenient:
 <ul>



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