[or-cvs] fix some typos

Roger Dingledine arma at seul.org
Sat Sep 11 18:16:20 UTC 2004


Update of /home/or/cvsroot/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc.html 
Log Message:
fix some typos


Index: tor-doc.html
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RCS file: /home/or/cvsroot/doc/tor-doc.html,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -d -r1.10 -r1.11
--- tor-doc.html	9 Sep 2004 23:38:07 -0000	1.10
+++ tor-doc.html	11 Sep 2004 18:16:18 -0000	1.11
@@ -47,9 +47,9 @@
 home-made movie anonymously via a Tor <a href="#hidden-service">hidden
 service</a>; and reading, e.g. of news sites not permitted in some
 countries.
-<li>Allowing their workers to check back with their home website while
+<li>Allowing your workers to check back with your home website while
 they're in a foreign country, without notifying everybody nearby that
-they're working with that organization.
+they're working with your organization.
 </ul>
 
 <p>Companies need Tor for business security:
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
 between all parties.
 <li>Networks partially under known hostile control: to block
 communications, the enemy must take down the whole network.
-<li>Politically sensitive negotations.
+<li>Politically sensitive negotiations.
 <li>Road warriors.
 <li>Protecting procurement patterns.
 <li>Anonymous tips.



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