[or-cvs] It seems that some people just don"t appreciate my avant-ga...

[Nick Mathewson]

Update of /home/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/tmp/cvs-serv3704/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-spec.txt 
Log Message:
It seems that some people just don't appreciate my avant-garde communication
style, and expect me to use sentences in documentation.  Doh.


Index: tor-spec.txt
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RCS file: /home/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-spec.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.73
retrieving revision 1.74
diff -u -d -r1.73 -r1.74
--- tor-spec.txt	30 Nov 2004 04:19:25 -0000	1.73
+++ tor-spec.txt	30 Nov 2004 06:18:46 -0000	1.74
@@ -693,10 +693,10 @@
 
        Same as declaring "port" as this OR's directory port in the 'router'
        line. At most one of dircacheport and the directory port in the router
-       line.
+       line may be non-zero.
 
        [Obsolete; will go away once 0.0.8 is dead. Older version of Tor
-       did poorly when non-authoritative directories has a non-0 directory
+       did poorly when non-authoritative directories has a non-zero directory
        port.  To transition, Tor 0.0.8 used dircacheport for
        nonauthoritative directories.]
 
@@ -707,7 +707,7 @@
 
    "family" names NL
 
-       'Names' is a space-separated list of server nicknames.  If two ORs
+       'Names' is a space-separated list of server nicknames. If two ORs
        list one another in their "family" entries, then OPs should treat
        them as a single OR for the purpose of path selection.
 
@@ -720,10 +720,9 @@
 
        Declare how much bandwidth the OR has used recently. Usage is divided
        into intervals of NSEC seconds.  The YYYY-MM-DD HH:MM:SS field defines
-       the end of the most recent interval.  The numbers list the number of
+       the end of the most recent interval.  The numbers are the number of
        bytes used in the most recent intervals, ordered from oldest to newest.
 
-
 nickname ::= between 1 and 19 alphanumeric characters, case-insensitive.
 
 exitpattern ::= addrspec ":" portspec
@@ -751,15 +750,15 @@
 
     "signed-directory"
 
-        Indicates the start of a
+        Indicates the start of a directory.
 
     "published" YYYY-MM-DD HH:MM:SS
 
         The time at which this directory was generated and signed, in GMT.
 
-    "directory-signing-key" 
+    "directory-signing-key"
 
-        The key used to sign this directory; see "signing-key".
+        The key used to sign this directory; see "signing-key" for format.
 
     "recommended-software"  comma-separated-version-list