[or-cvs] make usability/security discussion clearer

[Roger Dingledine]

Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/website
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/website

Modified Files:
	overview.html 
Log Message:
make usability/security discussion clearer


Index: overview.html
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--- overview.html	9 Dec 2004 21:33:03 -0000	1.10
+++ overview.html	10 Dec 2004 01:27:04 -0000	1.11
@@ -182,15 +182,16 @@
 <h3>The Future of Tor</h3>
 
 <p>
-Providing a usable anonymizing network on the Internet today is an
-ongoing challenge.  We want software that meets users' needs.  And we
-also want to keep the network up and running in a way that handles
-as many users as possible. Security and usability don't have to be at
-odds: as Tor's usability increases, it will attract more users, which
-in turn will increase security for everyone. We're making progress,
-but we need your help.  Please consider <a
-href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-doc.html#installing">installing</a> a <a
-href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-doc.html#server">server</a>
+Providing a usable anonymizing network on the Internet today is
+an ongoing challenge. We want software that meets users' needs.
+And we also want to keep the network up and running in a way that
+handles as many users as possible. Security and usability don't have
+to be at odds: as Tor's usability increases, it will attract more
+users, which will increase the possible sources and destinations
+of each communication, thus increasing security for everyone.
+We're making progress, but we need your help.  Please consider
+<a href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-doc.html#installing">installing</a>
+a <a href="cvs/tor/doc/tor-doc.html#server">server</a>
 or <a href="contribute.html">volunteering</a> as a <a
 href="developers.html">developer</a>.
 </p>