[or-cvs] even more cleanup

Roger Dingledine arma at seul.org
Sun Dec 19 06:31:27 UTC 2004


Update of /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc
In directory moria.mit.edu:/home2/arma/work/onion/cvs/tor/doc

Modified Files:
	tor-doc-win32.html 
Log Message:
even more cleanup


Index: tor-doc-win32.html
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RCS file: /home2/or/cvsroot/tor/doc/tor-doc-win32.html,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -d -r1.4 -r1.5
--- tor-doc-win32.html	19 Dec 2004 06:22:20 -0000	1.4
+++ tor-doc-win32.html	19 Dec 2004 06:31:24 -0000	1.5
@@ -15,13 +15,14 @@
 <h2>Installing Tor</h2>
 
 <p>
-The latest release of Tor for Windows 32 is <a
+The latest stable release of Tor for Windows 32 is <a
 href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/tor-0.0.9.1-win32.exe">0.0.9.1</a>.
-Download it by clicking the link. You may also be able to find other
-versions <a href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/">here</a>.
+Download it by clicking the link. You can find experimental versions
+<a href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/">here</a>.
 </p>
 
-<p>Our Tor installer should make everything pretty simple:
+<p>Our Tor installer should make everything pretty simple. Below is a
+screenshot of the setup page:
 </p>
 
 <img alt="tor installer splash page"
@@ -37,8 +38,9 @@
 <img alt="select components to install"
 src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/NGCS_008.jpg" />
 
-<p>It will run Tor in a DOS window so you can see its logs and
-errors. (You can minimize this window, but do not close it.)
+<p>Once the installer is finished, it will run Tor in a DOS window so
+you can see its logs and errors. (You can minimize this window, but do
+not close it.)
 </p>
 
 <img alt="tor window screenshot" src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/GCS_003.jpg" />
@@ -85,7 +87,7 @@
 href="http://tor.freehaven.net/cvs/tor/doc/CLIENTS">browsers leak your
 DNS requests when they use a socks proxy directly</a>, which is bad for
 your anonymity. Privoxy also removes certain dangerous headers from your
-web requests, and also blocks obnoxious ad sites like Doubleclick.</p>
+web requests, and blocks obnoxious ad sites like Doubleclick.</p>
 
 <p>To test if it's working, go to <a
 href="http://peertech.org/privacy-knoppix/">this site</a> and see
@@ -111,7 +113,7 @@
 instructions here.</p>
 
 <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please <a
-href="mailto:tor-bugs at freehaven.net">send them</a>. Thanks!</p>
+href="mailto:tor-bugs at freehaven.net">send them to us</a>. Thanks!</p>
 
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