[tor-bugs] #6922 [Company]: Write the storyboard/script for this video

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#6922: Write the storyboard/script for this video
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     Reporter:  phobos   |      Owner:
         Type:  project  |     Status:  new
     Priority:  normal   |  Milestone:
    Component:  Company  |    Version:
   Resolution:           |   Keywords:  SponsorI
Actual Points:           |  Parent ID:  #5991
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Comment (by runa):

 Comments on the updated script:

 '''Slide 2''': Roger is not the only person behind Tor. If you name one
 person, you should name the rest of the group as well.

 '''Slide 3''': I suggest you use a bigger timespan when generating the
 graphs. While 800,000 users in july-august of this year is great, going
 from 200,000 users to 800,000 users in a few years is better.

 '''Slide 4''': Same comment as above regarding the graph. You may want to
 rephrase your statement saying relay operators cannot monitor you or your
 traffic. A malicious exit relay operator can monitor your traffic, but can
 not link the data back to you. That is, no single relay in the circuit
 have enough information to figure out who you are *and* what you are
 doing.

 '''Slide 5''': Consider adding a sentence to the privacy-section to wrap
 this up nicely. You say that Tor can not encrypt the data between the
 network and the destination website, but you do not say anything about
 what the user should do to help with this.

 '''Slide 6''': The sentence about data retention does need some work, but
 you're on the right path.

 '''Slide 7''': You may want to define HTTPS to a non-technical audience;
 what does it mean? what does it do for me?

 '''Slide 9''': Looks like you still need to finish this part.

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