[tor-bugs] #5811 [Tor Support]: Translate the TSUM into human and improve section organization

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#5811: Translate the TSUM into human and improve section organization
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 Reporter:  mikeperry    |          Owner:  runa
     Type:  defect       |         Status:  new 
 Priority:  normal       |      Milestone:      
Component:  Tor Support  |        Version:      
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   Points:               |   Actualpoints:      
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 The Tor Short User Manual is appears to be written in mentat rather than
 human, and I find the section ordering and formatting confusing.

 I think it could benefit from a Table of Contents, and a few screenshots
 of what the TBB startup process looks like, and what the various failure
 modes look like (like blocking and bridge configuration). It probably
 should also include a brief description of the privacy properties you get
 from the Tor Browser (See #5294), and some hints on what the new Tor
 Browser branding actually looks like on your taskbar (so you don't use the
 wrong browser).

 Also, the GPG verification steps need to be improved to contain
 screenshots, moved to an "Advanced" section, or simply removed. How does
 one bootstrap trust in the downloaded GPG binary itself, anyway? Seems
 like useless noise to even mention GPG verification at that point.

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