[tor-bugs] #4960 [Tor Relay]: Investigate NAT-piercing approaches for relays and bridges

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#4960: Investigate NAT-piercing approaches for relays and bridges
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 Reporter:  karsten    |          Owner:  ioerror                
     Type:  project    |         Status:  new                    
 Priority:  normal     |      Milestone:  Sponsor F: July 1, 2012
Component:  Tor Relay  |        Version:                         
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Comment(by cypherpunks):

 From the desk of the language pedant:

 Introduction, second sentence is slightly clumsy, one sentence that could
 be two to read a bit easier.

 Page 3, section 2, paragraph 2, final word: s/simplicty/simplicity/ and
 one too many full stops.
 Page 3, Section 2, s/programatic/programmatic/ (and also programmatically
 - although both may no be considered correct)
 Capitalization of Local Area Network and Wide Area Network being
 consistent (in section 2, WAN is but LAN isn't)
 Page 4, Paragraph 2, s/reducable/reducible/
 Page 5, Section 6, paragraph 2, requisite is missing an i (it's requsite)
 Page 5, Section 7, paragraph 2, s/might might/might/
 Page 5, Section 8, second last line: "the the" -> "via the" ?
 Page 6, Section 9, second last line: s/signifigant/significant/

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