[tbb-dev] How much the Tor Browser is still a Bundle?
intrigeri at boum.org
Wed Mar 12 15:12:08 UTC 2014
Mike Perry wrote (11 Mar 2014 20:59:58 GMT) :
> Oh, actually I'm pretty sure my proposal is passive voice too
Yes. I'm sorry for the confusion.
> Here's two that aren't passive that got lost in the trim:
>> "Please wait while Tor establishes a network connection."
>> "Please wait while we establish a connection to the Tor network."
> After thinking about it while rewriting these, I think the last one is
> best in terms of explaining what is happening, and without passive
> voice. In particular, Tor isn't mucking with your network connection, or
> creating a new "network connection" on your computer.
Fine with me. Thanks!
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