[tbb-bugs] #21847 [Applications/Tor Browser]: Update copy for security slider to be consistent with the mobile experience

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#21847: Update copy for security slider to be consistent with the mobile experience
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 Reporter:  isabela                              |          Owner:  tbb-
                                                 |  team
     Type:  enhancement                          |         Status:  new
 Priority:  Medium                               |      Milestone:
Component:  Applications/Tor Browser             |        Version:
 Severity:  Normal                               |     Resolution:
 Keywords:  tbb-usability, tbb-security-slider,  |  Actual Points:
  TorBrowserTeam201712, GeorgKoppen201712        |
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Comment (by teor):

 Can we do some minor English copy editing here?

 "causing some sites will lose functionality"
 "causing some sites to lose functionality"

 And is there any reason why these headings are different?

 "At this cautious setting:"
 "At the strict security setting:"

 If not, let's use:

 "At the cautious security setting:"
 "At the strict security setting:"

 Or maybe for both:

 "At this setting:"

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