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=== https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/TorWeeklyNews/2013/24 ===
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version 18
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-13T13:20:07+00:00

   utterly misspelled 'swartz'

--- version 17
+++ version 18
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
 Roger Dingledine announced [XXX] the first stable release in the
 tor 0.2.4 series, as well as the dedication of this series to the memory
-of Aaron Schwartz (1986-2013). tor 0.2.4.19 boasts a large number of
+of Aaron Swartz (1986-2013). tor 0.2.4.19 boasts a large number of
 major new features, among them a new circuit handshake, improved link
 encryption, a flexible approach to the queueing of circuit creation
 requests, and the use of “directory guards” to defend against

version 17
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-13T13:18:49+00:00

   tbb 3.5rc1 item

--- version 16
+++ version 17
@@ -27,6 +27,21 @@
 
  [XXX] https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-talk/2013-December/031392.html
  [XXX] https://www.torproject.org/dist/
+
+Tor Browser Bundle 3.5rc1 is out
+--------------------------------
+
+Mike Perry announced [XXX] the first release candidate in the Tor
+Browser Bundle 3.5 series, and strongly encouraged users to update
+in anticipation of the imminent end-of-life of both the 2.x stable
+and 3.0 series, following Mozilla's deprecation of Firefox 17 ESR,
+on which both are based.
+
+This release also includes a number of important security updates,
+alongside various bugfixes and usability improvements; for this
+reason as well, users should update as soon as possible.
+
+ [XXX] https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tor-browser-bundle-35rc1-released
 
 Tails 0.22 is out
 -----------------
@@ -119,5 +134,4 @@
 
  * https://events.ccc.de/congress/2013/Fahrplan/events.html there's Tor related stuff there
  * targeted malware through app stores https://lists.torproject.org/pipermail/tor-dev/2013-December/005923.html
- * tails report for november https://tails.boum.org/news/report_2013_11/
- * Tor Browser Bundle 3.5rc1 https://blog.torproject.org/blog/tor-browser-bundle-35rc1-released+ * tails report for november https://tails.boum.org/news/report_2013_11/
version 16
Author: harmony
Date:   2013-12-13T13:06:24+00:00

   small t's as per discussion/minor rewording

--- version 15
+++ version 16
@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 Welcome to the twenty-fifth issue of Tor Weekly News, the weekly newsletter that
 covers what is happening in the XXX Tor community.
 
-Tor 0.2.4.19 is out
+tor 0.2.4.19 is out
 -------------------
 
 Roger Dingledine announced [XXX] the first stable release in the
-Tor 0.2.4 series, as well as the dedication of this series to the memory
-of Aaron Schwartz (1986-2013). Tor 0.2.4.19 boasts a large number of
+tor 0.2.4 series, as well as the dedication of this series to the memory
+of Aaron Schwartz (1986-2013). tor 0.2.4.19 boasts a large number of
 major new features, among them a new circuit handshake, improved link
 encryption, a flexible approach to the queueing of circuit creation
 requests, and the use of “directory guards” to defend against
@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@
 many major and minor improvements and bugfixes, and opens up the new
 incremental-upgrade feature for beta-testing.
 
-As this is the first release to feature a browser based on Firefox 24 ESR
-series, small inconveniences crept in. Have a look at the known issues
-before giving it a go.
+As this is the first release to feature a browser based on the Firefox
+24 ESR series, some small inconveniences found their way in. Have a
+look at the known issues before giving it a go.
 
-In any cases, it fixes several important security issues [XXX]. It is
-recommended that all users upgrade as soon as possible.
+Nevertheless, it fixes several important security issues [XXX], so it
+is recommended that all users upgrade as soon as possible.
 
  [XXX] https://tails.boum.org/news/version_0.22/
  [XXX] https://tails.boum.org/security/Numerous_security_holes_in_0.21/



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