Hi, Mike Perry wrote (11 Mar 2014 17:11:43 GMT) :
Luckily, the changes to make the strings generic are minimal. Here's a diff:
-<!ENTITY torsettings.prompt "Before the Tor Browser tries to connect to - the Tor network, you need to provide information about this computer's - Internet connection."> +<!ENTITY torsettings.prompt "Before you connect to the Tor network, you + need to provide information about this computer's Internet + connection.">
-<!ENTITY torprogress.pleaseWait "The Tor Browser will open after a Tor - network connection is established."> +<!ENTITY torprogress.pleaseWait "Please wait while a Tor network + connection is established.">
Does this look OK?
Seems good to me. Cheers, -- intrigeri | GnuPG key @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/intrigeri.asc | OTR fingerprint @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/otr.asc