11 Mar
2014
11 Mar
'14
6:13 p.m.
Hi, Mark Smith wrote (11 Mar 2014 17:23:58 GMT) :
OK by me. My only suggestion is to consider changing the last one to:
"Please wait while a connection to the Tor network is established."
Just my 2cts: most technical documentation style guides I've read recommend to avoid the passive voice. Cheers, -- intrigeri | GnuPG key @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/intrigeri.asc | OTR fingerprint @ https://gaffer.ptitcanardnoir.org/intrigeri/otr.asc