Hi,
Mike Perry wrote (11 Mar 2014 20:59:58 GMT) :
Oh, actually I'm pretty sure my proposal is passive voice too though.
Yes. I'm sorry for the confusion.
Here's two that aren't passive that got lost in the trim:
"Please wait while Tor establishes a network connection." "Please wait while we establish a connection to the Tor network."
After thinking about it while rewriting these, I think the last one is best in terms of explaining what is happening, and without passive voice. In particular, Tor isn't mucking with your network connection, or creating a new "network connection" on your computer.
Fine with me. Thanks!
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