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version 35
Author: harmony
Date:   2014-06-03T13:27:02+00:00

   some language tweaks / fix link

--- version 34
+++ version 35
@@ -20,21 +20,22 @@
 The Tails live system [1] is a Debian derivative [2] aiming at
 preserving the privacy and anonymity of its users.
 
-The first Tails release were based on Debian Lenny [3] (2009-2012).
-Since version 0.7, Tails is based on Debian Squeeze [4] (2011-).
-Meanwhile, Debian has released a new stable version dubbed Wheezy [5].
-The upcoming Tails 1.1 will be the first based on the latter.
-
-The general set of feature should not change much from the previous
-Tails release. But almost every software component has been updated. On
-May 30th, the Tails team released a beta image [6]. Given the number of
-changes, testing is even more welcomed than usual.
-
-Testers can also exercice the new UEFI support which enables Tails to
-boot on recent hardware and Mac.
-
-Several issues [7] have already been identified with the current beta
-image. Be sure to have a look at the list before reporting [8].
+The first Tails releases were based on Debian Lenny [3] (2009-2012);
+since version 0.7, Tails has been based on Debian Squeeze [4] (2011-).
+Meanwhile, Debian has released a new stable version dubbed Wheezy [5],
+and the upcoming Tails 1.1 will be the first release to be based on the
+latter.
+
+The general set of features should not change much from the previous
+Tails release, but almost every software component has been updated. On
+May 30th, the Tails team released a beta image [6]; given the number of
+changes, testing is even more welcome than usual.
+
+Testers can also try out the new UEFI support, which enables Tails to
+boot on recent hardware and on Macs.
+
+Several issues [7] with the current beta image have already been
+identified, so be sure to have a look at the list before reporting [8].
 
 The details of the release schedule are still being discussed [9] at the
 time of writing, but Tails 1.1 is likely to be out by the end of July.
@@ -55,14 +56,15 @@
 
 On June 1st, Damian Johnson announced [10] the release of Stem [11] 1.2.
 Stem is a Python library for interacting with the Tor daemon. It is now
-used by several applications [12] like the arm [13] status monitor or
+used by several applications [12] like the arm [13] status monitor and
 Philipp Winter’s exit scanner [14].
 
 The new version brings an interactive control interpreter, “a new method
 for interacting with Tor’s control interface that combines an
 interactive python interpreter with raw access similar to telnet”. This
-should happily save Tor hackers from manually poking the control port
-through telnet or having to create complete Stem scripts.
+should make Tor hackers happy by saving them from having to manually
+poke the control port through telnet or create complete Stem
+scripts.
 
 For the complete list of changes, head over to the changelog [15].
 
@@ -180,7 +182,7 @@
 you. Be sure to comment on the ticket when you have a fix!
 
   [39]: https://bridges.torproject.org/
-  [40]: https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/ticket/11216
+  [40]: https://bugs.torproject.org/11216
 
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