[TWN team] Recent changes to the wiki pages

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=== https://trac.torproject.org/projects/tor/wiki/TorWeeklyNews/2013/17 ===
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version 39
Author: karsten
Date:   2013-10-29T14:25:43+00:00

   The traceroute request was really sent by three people, not one.

--- version 38
+++ version 39
@@ -85,14 +85,14 @@
 For example, traffic that crosses the same country as it enters and
 leaves the Tor network can potentially be deanonymized by an authority
 in that country who can monitor all network communication.” 
-Karsten Loesing began his call for help to Tor relay operators [8]
+Karsten Loesing, Anupam Das, and Nikita Borisov began their call for help to Tor relay operators [8]
 by stating a problem that has recently attracted some interest by the
 research community.
 
 The question “which part of the Internet does a Tor relay lie in” is
 easy enough to answer, but “determining routes with high confidence has
 been difficult“ so far. The best source of information could come from
-the relay operators, as Karsten wrote: “To figure out where traffic
+the relay operators, as Karsten et al. wrote: “To figure out where traffic
 travels from your relay, we'd like you to run a bunch of ‘traceroutes’ —
 network measurements that show the paths traffic takes.”
 
@@ -104,10 +104,10 @@
 In order to participate, shell scripts are available which automate most
 of the process. They have been reviewed with care from several members
 of the Tor community and are available from a Git repository [9].
-Since Karsten's initial email, Anupam Das has assembled a FAQ regarding
+Since their initial email, Anupam Das has assembled a FAQ regarding
 scope, resource consumption, and other topics [10].
 
-Be sure to run the scripts if you can. As Karsten concluded “with your
+Be sure to run the scripts if you can. As Karsten, Anupam, and Nikita concluded, “with your
 help, we will keep improving to face the new challenges to privacy and
 freedom online.”
 

version 38
Author: lunar
Date:   2013-10-29T13:52:26+00:00

   minor rewording

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+++ version 38
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@
    [6] https://github.com/wfn/torsearch/blob/master/docs/use_cases_examples.md
    [7] https://www.torproject.org/projects/onionoo.html.en
 
-Collecting data to answer network adversaries
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+Collecting data against network level adversaries
+-------------------------------------------------
 
 “The anonymity of a connection over Tor is vulnerable
 to an adversary who can observe it in enough places along its route.



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